Hm... very good, I specially like the wavy hair. The bottom part of the nose could use some more volume and try drawing ears from reference, once you get how these strange things work, it becomes easy, since a well drawn ear goes unnoticed even if they don't look like the actual person's.
WILL DO SIR. Still will practice. I enjoy this style a lot and I like your criticism. any more details in how to make the nose have more volume? might it be a bit too flat with the shading? As for ears...pleh...they are hard to draw xD I shall have a ear sketch page soon xD
I am not sure if the lineart also affects it, but the part lacking volume is the... central part of the nose (em portuguÍs chama-se batata do nariz). The round and fattier part, where the tip is localized. Man, that's a long and useless description. Whatever, what I'm trying to say is a whiter tone in this region would pop it out and make it look more elevated than the nostrils, which should in fact stay behind. I see you actually did a differentiation over there, but too subtle to convince me. x)
Ahhh...that's always my problem. It's everything I make is always slightly unfinished but in this case it was only an experiment. I didn't know what to do at all with it... I thought I was only going to outline the hair, i wanted to keep it as simple as possible but...meh... Thank you!! drawing faces is really hard D: